REVIEW: Editing Final Product

This is a printscreen during the first draft process of our film review. We wanted to ensure that simplicity was a key theme throughout to suit the style that we wanted to achieve. We wanted the page to be uncluttered, However it became clear that too much "white space" took away from the professional look we aimed for, and instead looked empty and not reminesant of a film review from a magazine. From looking at the film reviews provided by the magazine "Little White Lies", we were able to base our film review around the layout, to ensure we acheieved a more professional and stylsh finished product. After adjusting the text to remain in line with eachother, adding a 'rating system' and a main focal image, our film review consisted of a simple and uncluttered layout which would appeal to our target audience of film lovers.